Good, Bad, and Ugly

A stylish addition?

July 15, 2009

Thanks for putting your styleguide online as a copy editor it is a very helpful document for me. I believe, though, that I found a typo in the entry for ancestor.

Charged with allegedly?

July 14, 2009

Chicago cemetery graves dug up and resold: police

CHICAGO, July 9 (Reuters) – Four Chicago-area cemetery workers have been charged with allegedly digging up graves and dumping the remains so the burial plots could be resold, prosecutors said on Thursday.

Another Reuters?

July 1, 2009

Hi my name is Kyle Reuter and i was wondering if its legal for me to do News using my last name????

300 years old?

June 22, 2009

British WWI veteran becomes world’s oldest man

Allingham’s life has spanned three centuries and six monarchs, starting with Queen Victoria. He has five grandchildren, 12 great-grandchildren, 14 great-great grandchildren and one great-great-great grandchild.

Too many wrong words

June 10, 2009

Energy Secretary proudly admits: “I am a nerd” While many of President Barack Obama’s cabinet secretaries zoom around the nation’s capital in black sedans, Chu will occasionally pull into Energy Department headquarters on his bike, with his security detail peddling close behind.

Your story today on Energy Secretary Steven Chu riding to work on his bike, “with his security detail peddling close behind,” leave the reader wondering what the Secret Service is peddling. Energy efficient light bulbs, perhaps? Come on, writers and editors, open the dictionay and remember the homonyms you learned in 5th grade. Bikes aren’t peddled except by salesmen. Rab

EU sees tighter budgets when recovery takes hold “Most definitely we need to get back on a sustainable track of fiscal policy eventually, but I think 2009 is definitely still too early to start reigning in public spending,” Borg said.

In your lead story at 11:15 am today it should be reining, not reigning. Bertha

Ecuador vows tougher line on oil companies Ecuador has no significant production of precious metals, but foreign companies like Kinross Gold and Corriente Resources have found world-class deposits in the country’s Amazon juggle.

I suspect you meant “jungle.” A.T.

Sloppy editing on all counts. We fixed, of course, but not before readers noticed: GBU Editor

A lesson learnt?

June 8, 2009

Really, I do like you, Obama tells French and Germans

But he learnt, like the most popular kid in school who everyone wants to befriend, that the slightest gesture can seem like a snub to those anxious to be liked.

Unfortunate wording?

June 5, 2009

Double blast against Obama shows strain on Qaeda

LONDON (Reuters) – A double blast from al Qaeda against Barack Obama shows shows the group is as worried as ever by the persuasive skills of the U.S. president, who makes a speech to Muslims on Thursday.

First Hispanic?

June 4, 2009

Racial ruling looms large for Sotomayor

WASHINGTON (Reuters) – As the first Hispanic nominee to the U.S. Supreme Court, Sonia Sotomayor has been praised as a trailblazer in her field but race-based hiring practices will likely loom large at her confirmation hearings.

Dude, don’t use this in stories…

May 27, 2009

Wall St Week Ahead: Positive data needed to lift stocks

DUDE, YOU’RE GETTING DELL’S RESULTS

Also on the docket for next week is Dell Inc. The No. 2 PC maker said on Thursday that it is still cautious about corporate technology spending, but plans to make acquisitions and aggressively pursue enterprise customers in an attempt to win back market share in the United States.

A pence for your thoughts?

May 24, 2009

Sterling plummets as S&P cuts UK rating outlook

The pound shed 3 cents on the day to fall as low as $1.5514 while the euro jumped more than one pence to 88.69 pence.