Comments on: A skeleton crew of bikini models?

By: Malteser

Malteser — Mon, 04 Jul 2011 12:52:08 +0000

Seeing this again I realise that my haiku (above) starting “Five and Five” was not, really, a haiku. Hehehe

By: Shra

Shra — Tue, 21 Jun 2011 14:29:33 +0000

A zap on the tosh might be
Quite Continental
But doughnuts are an OE’s best friend
A zap is not a brand
though it might seem really grand
it would help you from learning
also warn you from teaching
Doughnuts grow cold as OE bloggers grow old
And we all lose our wits in the end
But sprinkled or not these doughnuts don’t lose their Doughnuts are an OE’s best friend!

By: Malteser

Malteser — Tue, 21 Jun 2011 13:43:58 +0000

You’re on a roll Spin, good one!

These models inspire;
With their weird attire,
skinny physiques,
and bony cheeks –
The need for doughnuts is dire!

By: Malteser

Malteser — Tue, 21 Jun 2011 08:09:59 +0000

{haha…seems so far we kept this under the radar… that’s a zap-limitation it seems, poetry is spared…)

By: Malteser

Malteser — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 14:32:10 +0000

I thank thee Spin for helping me,
As I am just a newbie, see!
But I should not learn -
Or a zap I’d earn,
For Shra’s zapper won’t leave us free!

By: Malteser

Malteser — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 08:56:55 +0000

Thanks for your comment Spin.. I’m also new to haiku.. i guess rhyme is not needed so long as,…wait.. this might end up in a zapper.

Five and Five
And a seven in between:
You have a haiku!

…right?

By: AllThatJazz

AllThatJazz — Fri, 17 Jun 2011 15:44:33 +0000

One more:

If this gal stuck out
her tongue and turned sideways she’d
look like a zipper!

By: fwd079

fwd079 — Fri, 17 Jun 2011 15:19:52 +0000

@Spin: Thanks, going to try but can’t write it often, difficult thing, hence asked you

By: Malteser

Malteser — Fri, 17 Jun 2011 14:56:06 +0000

She is very thin –
I can barely see her skin..
That’s a skeleton!

By: Malteser

Malteser — Fri, 17 Jun 2011 13:07:58 +0000

It’s fugly to be that skinny. Sometimes i wonder how the clothes don’t just slide down off their bodies when they’re so thin. I’m sure they use some adhesive or cellotape.